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Apollo
OceanMaster Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 8908 Status: Offline |
Are you sitting comfortably? Then let me tell you a tale. A long time ago, in a land far away, An ocean called Azure had reached its last day. The denizens, names that we whisper with awe, Had Azure behind them, and Midnight before The great Ringer Nemo was saddened to think The history of this great ocean might sink An epic he wanted; would someone supply A chanty for us to remember it by? And so he commissioned Akebia, who Had Fronsac and Ursela lend a hand too Between them they drafted a chanty, a tale Of all their fond mem'ries since Azure set sail This chanty so epic, a gem of its time, A diamond, a masterpiece crafted in rhyme. Enjoy now this chanty, and then I'll explain The reason I've posted this epic again!
The Event! April is National Poetry Month (NPM) in the US, and we're going to join the celebration by putting together an updated version of this great Epic Chanty. This will be a collaborative project, and I hope that many pirates will contribute to the final version. Themes In order to keep the project manageable, I'd like the result of this event to be a single cohesive chanty. This means that for this event, the themes of the verses should keep to the history and development of the game as a whole, rather than the histories of individual oceans, islands or crews. Suitable themes might include the early days on Midnight, the addition of new puzzles, introduction of new oceans, new features. As well as the entry thread, there is also a thread where you can make suggestions for content themes. Poets with more aspiration than inspiration may be able to pick up an idea and create a verse for your theme ideas! Again, stick to generic game themes rather than ocean-specific - although it might be fun in the future to run different versions of this event to cover themes like individual oceans, crews, flags or pirates! Poetry requirements Structure Our New Epic Chanty will follow the same structure as the previous one, with blocks of four 4-line verses interpersed by a chorus. If you look at the content of the original Epic Chanty, each set of verses describes a new theme or game change, with reactions and a summary of the change. We will stick to this basic approach, although not to the strict thematic structure used. Rhyme Scheme Within each 4-line verse, the rhyme scheme should be AABB (that is, the first two lines rhyme, the second two lines rhyme). Meter This is written in anapestic tetramater (but with the first weak beat missed on each line) and your contributions should follow the same meter. If "duh" is a weak beat, and "DAH" is a stressed beat, each verse should follow this meter: duh DAH duh duh DAH duh duh DAH duh duh DAH duh DAH duh duh DAH duh duh DAH duh duh DAH duh DAH duh duh DAH duh duh DAH duh duh DAH duh DAH duh duh DAH duh duh DAH duh duh DAH Prizes I hope that people will have fun participating and collaborating on this project for its own sake. However, as well as the fun and the glory, for players who contribute to the final version, we'll award inscribed trinkets to commemorate the occasion! We'll also be offering some real-life Y!PP prizes for some contributors - a Y!PP mousepad, tote bag or playing cards! Suggesting themes * If you simply wish to post ideas for content or themes, please use the thread linked here. Feel free to include links to resources like forum threads or YPPedia pages along with your suggestions. Notes for entries * If you wish to contribute to the chanty itself, here are some additional rules to guide you -- The entry thread is linked here -- Include your pirate name and ocean in your post (or in your signature) -- On the short side, you may enter as little as a couplet (two lines) -- On the long side, you may enter as many verses as you wish, but PLEASE concentrate on quality rather than quantity - you're more likely to get one well-written verse included than you are to get any part of 12 mediocre verses included! -- You do not need to choose an unused theme - even if someone else has covered your theme(s), you may still enter using them -- It would be helpful if you could give keywords for your theme before you post your verse(s) - e.g. "rumbling, zombies", "Opal opening". -- If you enter multiple verses, they do not need to form a full block - they can equally be unconnected verses. In this case, separate the changes of subject with the relevant theme description! -- If you enter multiple contributions, please edit them all into the same post rather than posting more than once -- For the chorus, we are intending to keep close to the original chorus (slightly edited). However, if you're struck with a thought of great genius, you may also enter a chorus suggestion if you wish! The final chanty will be constucted from all the entries - it is plausible that whole blocks will be included from one entrant, but equally possible that only portions of an entry will be used. We may also need to edit your contribution for content, meter or rhyme, once we come to merge all the component parts! Deadline We are allowing the whole of National Poetry Month for this project - the deadline is 11:59pm game time on April 30th 2009. If you have any further questions about this event, please post them here in this thread, and I'll answer. ---------------------------------------- [Edit 5 times, last edit by Apollo at Jun 29, 2009 2:55:01 PM] |
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AhoyLindsay
Joined: Sep 9, 2005 Posts: 3063 Status: Offline |
Oh man, this is going to be fun. ---------------------------------------- Castawayjoe of the Midnight Ocean. To err is human, but to arr is pirate. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Catharsis on Cobalt and Malachite. |
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Kaalvoet
Joined: Sep 17, 2005 Posts: 765 Status: Offline |
Oh I love it when you rhyme <3 /e swoons ---------------------------------------- The Infamous Feline Pirate Kitt on Cobalt Rehio says, "Yes, O Mistress" |
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Gyps13
Joined: Dec 11, 2007 Posts: 280 Status: Offline |
So, are we starting with Midnight and ending with Malachite? Or is it open-ended? Can we Ice testers enter anything from that, like the recent releases/test, or are we sticking with the production -oceans? Wow, I suddenly feel young, having only started in the last 2-3 years. lol I don't know any history, except a bit of Mala. ^_^ ---------------------------------------- ~ Jaede ~ Malachite Dragon Eggs Pokemon Eggs *Current Avi by Scheherazade* |
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Apollo
OceanMaster Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 8908 Status: Offline |
Introduction of oceans, if mentioned, would make sense to be in chronological order, if that's what you are asking!
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micklauer
Joined: Oct 16, 2005 Posts: 2269 Status: Offline |
Are we allowed occasional feminine endings...I realize that it's generally used in iambic pentameter...but I was curious if you allowed an attentional weak syllable for line endings :) (ie. The lives of us pirates, bring riches and glory) hugs, kp ---------------------------------------- Avatar by Kolibri Devout follower of Apollo d(-_^) Blackhat Approved |
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Apollo
OceanMaster Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 8908 Status: Offline |
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samuelcostan
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Hey guys, this isnt exactly an ocean poem, but Its my own one I made up, hope you enjoy it. Samuraicoza - Viridian - There comes a time, where you must let go of all the feelings you have, all the friends you know. They had finished their quest, and it was time to leave, time to cry, and time to greave. He walked away, leaving with a weary tear, they watched their friend go, feeling their hearts shear. He stepped onto the docks, then onto the ship, a tear crawled down, dripped down to his lip. He thought about his past, it felt like time had went so fast, so he looked to the sky, and breathed a heavy sigh. He turned around slowly, looking up to his friends, trying to heal their wounds, and forever mend. He faked a smile, knowing he?d be gone for awhile, so he waved goodbye, and sailed from the isle. ---------------------------------------- [Edit 2 times, last edit by samuelcostan at Apr 9, 2009 6:00:26 AM] |
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Emoxcore2
Joined: Apr 4, 2007 Posts: 205 Status: Offline |
Awesome ;D Never knew there was a poetry month.. ---------------------------------------- Emoxcore on the Viridian Ocean. Avatar by Princessina <3 |
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admspanky
Joined: Jun 2, 2006 Posts: 72 Status: Offline |
ok i dig the poetry thing. not my style of poetry tho. When do we get to do a history in normal writing of a particular ocean? Jus wondering :P ---------------------------------------- Cptrayford Senior Officer and Proud Mascotte of: Flying Crossbones Proud member of: BLACK FLAG yes i just realized its a bug killer spray. SLOWNESS! |
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Terrify
Joined: Feb 5, 2009 Posts: 881 Status: Offline |
I enjoyed writing my poem, thanks for the event. ---------------------------------------- Terrify, Hunter Ocean. Avatar by Dexla. |
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Apollo
OceanMaster Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 8908 Status: Offline |
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drbevbee14
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that was a beautiful poem Apollo You speak well beyond the years you have been playing Puzzlepirates For much time Apollo,God of light,music the lyre and poetry made many poems You Apollo are a great peom maker your poem speaks to me in a diffrent way none can speak |
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BlackBeth
Joined: Feb 28, 2005 Posts: 1855 Status: Offline |
Last day for entries! I think everyone should write one more verse and post it (I did)! There's lots of long sections about big things like CI and Atlantis, but I think more single verses about cool or amusing things (pets, event blockades, housing, whatever) would be good for rounding out the Chanty. Otherwise it's gonna be all about the Adventures, like we don't do anything else. So get rhyming! ---------------------------------------- Feylind Semi-retired |
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Framling
Joined: Sep 11, 2005 Posts: 991 Status: Offline |
That was FUN :) The metre kept giving me trouble until I pretended I was writing "The Night Before Christmas". (PS make the next ocean easier to rhyme stuff with please) ---------------------------------------- Framling on Viridian Lolpirate says, "O.o Your ability to rhyme is unholy." Avatar doodled by Feesh! |
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BlackBeth
Joined: Feb 28, 2005 Posts: 1855 Status: Offline |
Even Night before Christmas didn't help me... I had to paste the "duh DAH duh duh DAH duh duh DAH duh duh DAH" lines right above where I was working for constant reference. And I owe a big thanks to Leif and Mistymate who hung out on a google spreadsheet with me while we all attempted our chanty verses. Someone else to point out where the meter failed or I had an extra syllable was invaluable. ---------------------------------------- Feylind Semi-retired |
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Luvessy
Joined: Dec 1, 2003 Posts: 2658 Status: Offline |
I think my co-workers are real curious why I kept tapping that meter on my desk the past few days. Ooh, ooh! I want to thank Fey for taking me past the "yeah, I should give that a try..." to actually starting to write down ideas. The collaboration was awesome and great fun! ---------------------------------------- --Mistymate (Avatar by Sancha.) ---------------------------------------- [Edit 1 times, last edit by Luvessy at Apr 30, 2009 10:41:13 PM] |
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Apollo
OceanMaster Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 8908 Status: Offline |
*grins* Hope you had fun - the entry thread is closed now. The results will be announced along with the completed chanty, so please be patient whle we work through the entries! |
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Terrify
Joined: Feb 5, 2009 Posts: 881 Status: Offline |
I wish everyone good luck, I hope i win. ;p ---------------------------------------- Terrify, Hunter Ocean. Avatar by Dexla. |
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Talisker
Joined: Jul 24, 2003 Posts: 11126 Status: Offline |
Agreed. I started late, but enjoyed playing along with Fey and Misty. Good times, good times. Also, I'm angry at Dr. Seuss for not writing Green Eggs and Ham in anapestic tetrameter, despite the fact that many of his books are in that meter. NICE TIME FOR IAMBIC, DOC! Otherwise there would have totally been a Green Cats and Rats spoof. ---------------------------------------- Leif The Forums
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Apollo
OceanMaster Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 8908 Status: Offline |
Yeah. Bad boy, Dr Suess! |
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Jolyma
Joined: Sep 17, 2005 Posts: 8653 Status: Offline |
I had a lot of fun, but poetry has never been my forte. I just posted 11 syllables per line, and hoped it read well. ---------------------------------------- Jolyma Avatar by Sundancer |
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Luther8
Joined: May 25, 2007 Posts: 249 Status: Offline |
Yeah good luck to all and I too had the "da dah da dah" stuff above my musings while I worked. ---------------------------------------- Luckylad of Midnight |
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Apollo
OceanMaster Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 8908 Status: Offline |
Judging update: I'd hoped to be finalizing results and winners by now, but I'm afraid we're not there yet. Please don't expect results from this until the first week in June now. Sorry for the delay! |
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Blackfire45
Joined: Jun 27, 2006 Posts: 136 Status: Offline |
I can't wait to see the final version of this chanty. It's certainly going to be .. uhmm .. epic. >=D ---------------------------------------- This is me------>Bloodyarm |
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Smartjenny
Joined: Jan 26, 2008 Posts: 170 Status: Offline |
This gives me a good idea.... Anyone point me to a 'Post Piratey Poetry' thread? ---------------------------------------- Pepperminty SO of Serenity on Cobalt
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Minsiem
Joined: Mar 26, 2006 Posts: 1559 Status: Offline |
Somewhere in Mariner's Muse, perhaps? ---------------------------------------- Minsiem the Facetious of Cerulean-West: a Burple Punny I wonder if they are using the same internet we are using. |
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Smartjenny
Joined: Jan 26, 2008 Posts: 170 Status: Offline |
I'll look...... /me goes and looks. ---------------------------------------- Pepperminty SO of Serenity on Cobalt
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mkessler
Joined: Oct 15, 2008 Posts: 230 Status: Offline |
I am so excited to see the results on this... any updates? Thanks, Isza of Sage. ---------------------------------------- Isza of Emerald |
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Apollo
OceanMaster Joined: Sep 27, 2005 Posts: 8908 Status: Offline |
I'm afraid it got put on hold - sorry about that! It's been re-poked this week and we'll try to get results to you as soon as possible. |
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