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Two of me crewmates are getting married on satrday so i'm making this picture and I wondered if anyone had any pointers before I get to underweigh. Thanks,

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v443/metnalpics/Kaits/MastelesmallFINAL.gif

I am going to change the water color tomorrow and will update this.
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Its very large so perhaps you should just link to it for others to view.
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She's marrying a floating head?

You asked for criticism, you get criticism... what you are looking for is critique :)
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Its very large so perhaps you should just link to it for others to view.

Updated.





The color is a little messed up because it's a gif but I'm giving them the .mix file.
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Viridian - Anabanana - Officer and Poet of RLS Legacy under the flag Pay for Play
Hunter - Kaits - Officer and Poet of Pitch Black under the flag of The Eye
 
Oringinalsexy says, "anabanana who do you think you are? Hypnos?"

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Very nice. I like :)

Is there any way to get a bit more perspective on the sea though? I feel like its a big tidal wave coming towards them at the moment.
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Maybe a ship railing or a beach? Might even help just to move the horizon line down. I'm not much good at art but I know that in photography you usually want the horizon high or low but not right in the middle.

Beautiful picture hope they love it!
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Aye, I just notied the horizon looked odd. I'll fix that tonight.

Here is the practicly finished version:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v443/metnalpics/Kaits/mastelesmall.gif
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That is soooo cute - they'll love it.

Yep - the horizon should be straight if it's sea - it would be a shame if they were washed away by a tsunami before the honeymoon!
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One thing that always makes sunset pictures for me is the stylized birds flying into the horizon.
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http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v443/metnalpics/Kaits/MastelesmallFINAL.gif

I realized that Ele is a blond. >_<
I'm still finishing it up. I put in the dock, but I forgot about straightening the horizon. Maybe I'll try some birds. :)
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Viridian - Anabanana - Officer and Poet of RLS Legacy under the flag Pay for Play
Hunter - Kaits - Officer and Poet of Pitch Black under the flag of The Eye
 
Oringinalsexy says, "anabanana who do you think you are? Hypnos?"

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The dock really does seem to help the perspective quite a bit. Maybe some ropes too? or is it getting too complicated?

Oh and I love the way her shirt turned out.
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Thankee!

I thought about some ropes but it didn't look right when I tried it.

Ok, I finsished the entire picture. Just in time fer the wedding.
Thanks fer yer comments. :)
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Viridian - Anabanana - Officer and Poet of RLS Legacy under the flag Pay for Play
Hunter - Kaits - Officer and Poet of Pitch Black under the flag of The Eye
 
Oringinalsexy says, "anabanana who do you think you are? Hypnos?"

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